I'm pleased that the characters and the way the story is set up worked for you. I have to admit that I completely fell in love with Sarah. (She started out as a pretty minor character.)
The whole idea of this story came from the idea that, instead of just wandering around feeling sorry for himself, Jack decided to take control of as much of his life as he could. Of course, this does tend to make a person mature.
I've started sketching out two stories in this verse. The first would be immediately following this one (if I can keep it up, it would eventually follow Jack and Torchwood until 2000.) The second story starts on December 31, 1999, and continues. (Of course, there's also the story about how Jack handles the formation of UNIT and a certain Lethbridge-Stewart, so . . .)
Thanks for your review; a long review like this really makes my day. (And don't worry about your English; I had no trouble following it and probably wouldn't have guessed that it isn't your first language.)
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I'm pleased that the characters and the way the story is set up worked for you. I have to admit that I completely fell in love with Sarah. (She started out as a pretty minor character.)
The whole idea of this story came from the idea that, instead of just wandering around feeling sorry for himself, Jack decided to take control of as much of his life as he could. Of course, this does tend to make a person mature.
I've started sketching out two stories in this verse. The first would be immediately following this one (if I can keep it up, it would eventually follow Jack and Torchwood until 2000.) The second story starts on December 31, 1999, and continues. (Of course, there's also the story about how Jack handles the formation of UNIT and a certain Lethbridge-Stewart, so . . .)
Thanks for your review; a long review like this really makes my day. (And don't worry about your English; I had no trouble following it and probably wouldn't have guessed that it isn't your first language.)